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Early this year, Allah rezeki kan that I found an online Creative Writing Club for Tariq, Alhamdulillah! 🤩
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Many weeks later, Tariq said that this is one of his favourite classes, MashaAllah Alhamdulillah!! 🥳💖
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Taught by a writer herself, the Creative Writing Club members meet weekly and they are guided on how to write short stories from different type of genres every single week such as Historical Fiction, Espionage Fiction, Spy Fiction, Mystery Thrillers, Children Fiction and many more, SubhanAllah! 😍
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So Tariq’s first genre he wrote on the first week of his Club meet was Historical Fiction.
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And I was super delighted that Tariq did very well as he blended his knowledge of History and Science with his wild imagination, Alhamdulillah!🥰🥰
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However, reading one paragraph he wrote (below), I knew I had a job to do.
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[Mushtuk became unconscious and when he woke up he saw his body dying with only little water left, recreated it into a new body and with last droplet he sent his soul into the new body, so he was stronger than ever.]
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… Tariq, can you tell me what is wrong with this paragraph that you wrote..? I asked him
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Tariq looked at it for 2 seconds and answered..,
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…. Incarnation and challenging Allah.., Mama…, said Tariq slowly
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…. Yes, sayang, what you wrote here can lead to Shirk, nauzubillah. I know you have to use your imagination, but whatever imagination you have, it must not go against your belief and creed as a Muslim, understand, sayang..?
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…. Understand Mama…, said Tariq
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…. Now correct it sayang. Think as a Muslim and re-write this paragraph.., I said to Tariq
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And he did! 🥰
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Well done sayang, MashaAllah Alhamdulillah!! 💖
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Keep it up!! 🌟🌟🌟
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Mama and Baba really look forward to read the stories you write, week after week!!
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Thank you Allah for this rezeki. We are truly grateful ya Rabb!!💖💖💖
Sharing below was the story Tariq wrote in his first week.
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Enjoy!! 💥
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Writer: Tariq Abd Hamid
Genre: Historical Fiction
Once upon a time, a tribe ruled over the Turkish lands with
their powerful and mighty dragons soaring high over the sky.
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One day a boy named Karslan and his friend Mushtuk saw a
dying star falling down to Earth. To be more precise, towards them.
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They tried to run to avoid the impact but it was too fast
and hit them.
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When the duo woke up they were astonished. They survived the
impact.
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But just when they thought they were safe, a mysterious
creature came out of the dying star. The creature told them “ you only have ten
days to find the core and stop the apocalypse from happening “.
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And with that the alien died. Then they did any normal
person would do- cry and scream.
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When Karslan screamed, fire burst out of his hands. He was
surprised and scared, but he knew that it could help people.
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When his friend Mushtuk cried, fountains and lakes open from
his tears so, he knew that he could control water.
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When they found they had the abilities, they sneakily went
back to their tents and told the leader what happened.
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The leader believed them. At first they were surprised but
the leader told them that their ancestors said this day would come.
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So the leader said the core is actually something called
Crisilian located at the Centre of the Earth.
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They prepared and left the next day.
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After 2 days, they reached the Centre of the Earth.
They found the Crisilian. But they also
found out that the Crisilian can enhance their powers.
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Karslan grew greedy for power and betrayed Mushtuk.
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Mushtuk became unconscious. And when he woke up he knew his
body was weak and dying. And he made a prayer to Allah for strength and Allah
accepted it and he became stronger than ever.
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He chased after Karslan days on end. On the last day he
finally saw what could cause the apocalypse.
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A huge asteroid the size of the sun dive towards them. Then
he saw Karslan, he snatched the core and broke it. The crystal inside was the
real core . He threw it towards the asteroid and the asteroid flew away.
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The end.
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